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Tuesday, September 15, 2020

The Race - Tony Stark

 

His heart was pounding as they flew over the crest of the hill. He could taste the gritty dirt that had blown underneath his helmet, and the trickle of sweat that poured down in his neck. The roar of the engines filled his ears, and he fixed his eyes on the next jump; this was his chance to shine...


Tony revved the engine, and flew off the jump. He was passing everyone! The people watching were at the edge of their seats. Tony did a 360 and made everyone gasp. He finished the jump and was in 1st place. The finish line was 1000m away, so he was close-ish.


 Suddenly someone whose skin was light blue for some reason popped out of the crowd. “NOO NOT MR. MEESEEKS!!” “Look at me! I’m Mr. Meeseeks!” Mr. Meeseks got a gun and shot his tyre. He flew off his motorbike and crashed. Mr. Meeseeks laughed evilly and ran off. Mostly everyone who was racing just ran away like cowards but he just tried to jog towards the finish line. It was kind of obvious he wasn’t gonna make it 😂 so he tried to fix his bike with his spare wrench. (His cousin Jules is an engineer)  But he fixed it enough so that it was kind of fixed and he tried to get to the finish line.


 He realised that he needed to get Mr. Meeseks so he got his grapple gun and went over to Mr. Meeseeks hideout. Tony broke open the door and found Mr. Meeseeks brother. He asked what Tony was doing here and he explained. Tony had no time to mess around so he ran back to the racing area to fix his bike. It wasn’t working so he ran 500 meters to the bike rental but he couldn’t pay for the red bike. He realised his money was at home and his home was 3 hours away. Tony didn’t care and started walking.


 He grabbed a lot of materials for his next invention and walked for ages, But when he was nearing his home he saw a hostage being taken but he realised he had a Stark-Sword-9000 so he aimed at the robber and turned the Sword to knockout mode and fired. The hostage was saved!


 Now he went inside to get his money and took a quick glimpse at his in-the-works cardboard suit and if he won the race and got the money he would be rich and make an actual nickel titanium suit. LOL that would be awesome. 


Anyways he stopped dreaming and took a taxi back to the race. People’s bikes were broken down so he had a good chance! He had his bike on the back of the taxi so he got it down and put on the track and started racing. 


The host went like “Where did he come from” and “He was 3 hours!” Tony did a flip on the second-last jump and for the final jump he did (no lie) the best flip recorded in human history!!! The host was open-mouthed as Tony raced across the finish line (WOOO!!)


 Everyone screamed and cheered and Tony was given a trophy and the 100,0000 dollars he was promised! He did a fist pump and his mum came up to him and started crying. Tony had no idea why but he realised that he could now pay for his mum's mental health. He also realised that he can get a nickel titanium suit too! 😎😎😎 After everything he had a sleep.


 The next morning Tony got up and made his suit! He called it Iron Man. Even though it’s not made of iron haha. He needed a test drive so he called over his buddy Peter Parker and he flew onto the roof. So he made a circle for his chest so his armour can stay on. He flew around New York! It was exhilarating! 


6 comments:

  1. WOW Mikaere.
    I almost felt like I was standing near the track while the bikers were riding.Your words dragged me in and gave me a picture in my head.You have used some SUPER describing words.GREAT EFFORT😊.
    I hope Tony Stark checks out your blog😇

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  2. Wow incredible Mikaere,such a good story writer, just like your mum was.

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  3. ayy long story awesome story Mikaere!!

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  4. hello Mikaere.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.

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  5. Kia ora Mikaere.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.I can't wait to see your next learning post.

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